Secrets

Just a simple small poem on secrets.

Secrets

 

If secrets were meant to be broken the universe was meant to be explained

If secrets were meant to be broken then depression is the result of happiness

If secrets were meant to be broken then inevitability was just a coincidence

If secrets were meant to be broken then Jesus is Satan’s brother

If secrets were meant to be broken then secrets are just conversations that slowly reveal themselves

Author's Note

I f**king HATE it when people tell me their secrets.

-Bliss

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

A secret is to be exactly that.......A SECRET!! Your ability to work through what it means when a secret is broken is well thought out, or perhaps written, spilling off the tongue of one who knows what it means to have a secret given away - BETRAYED!

[Blissful Sin]

Thank you~!

[Lisa Victoria]

Hmmm....very thought provoking. I guess people share their secrets to unload a burden, but never think that the burden has now been placed on another. Thanks for sharing:)

[Me]

Interesting read hun, yup other peoples secrets can be such a burden to carry :) x

[Sami Khalil]

A very interesting poem. Thought provoking...:)

[Blissful Sin]

Thanks for stopping by again!!

-Bliss

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Wolfwind]

Fascinating philosophy. I think each line has a lot of truth in it. Why would being told another secrets be such an issue? I would think it would be an honor as most people confide in who they trust... or trust to do the right thing with the secret.

Thanks for sharing Bliss! =)
Aaron - Wolfwind

[Blissful Sin]

I get what your saying... I guess I just have MAJOR trust issues...
but its nice to put things out sometimes :)

-Bliss