Mother's day

A mother's day poem

 

Here’s a poem

Just to say

A few special words

On your special day

 

Of all the mothers in the world

It is other kids I pity

Cause I was blessed with a mom

Who is smart and witty

 

And though sometimes I hate it

When you scream and shout

You’re one mom who’s

Cool without a doubt!

 

Just because you’re cool

It doesn’t make you cold

Cause I’ve got mom who’s heart

Has always been set in gold

 

Of all the moms in the world you’re mine

And that’s why I want to say

That for everything you’ve done

Happy Mother’s Day!

 

So here’s a gift

Wrapped in smiles

That could keep going

For miles and miles

Author's Note

Wrote this on mother's day a couple years back.

Reviews

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

good, but a little too 'greeting card cute' if you get what I mean. You have a great start - try reading all different kinds of poetry. My creative writing teacher said that poetry isn't just saying something - it's saying something in a way no one else can.

best of luck :)