Deep Cut

Deep Cut

A Poem by Bloody_Stars

Black clouds forming over my head

Layer by layer it's building up

My heart has been cut

This time it went deep

Tears stream down my cheeks

Every night I cannot sleep

Without you, I'm nothing

I let my mind wander

But only focus on waht truly has to be done

And that's sticking by you and my son

Our pain for our lost will ease

It's just us

It's just now

This cut will heal

I promise us that.

© 2011 Bloody_Stars


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Not bad. I like the emotion in it. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 22, 2011
Last Updated on February 27, 2011

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Bloody_Stars
Bloody_Stars

San Diego, CA



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