A Poem by Bloody_Stars

This is for a friend of mine who recently died. He will be missed.


When I met you, I thought you were cute

You were funny and all tatted up

In the passgeways you always messed with me

And I would mess back

I like the names you called me

Werid to say that but it's true

I wish I knew you better

Sometimes you were a dick so I stayed a distant

Everyone knew you were a daredevil

But why didn't you just pull over and take on the consequences

You were so young, like me

Had a pretty good life

I hope you are in a better place

Me and everyone is going to miss you

The ship won't ever be the same

R.I.P. John Topor

© 2011 Bloody_Stars

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Added on September 19, 2011
Last Updated on September 24, 2011



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