To like a Girl

To like a Girl

A Poem by Bloody_Stars

Never did I thought I would like a girl this much

For you to actully be interested in me

To hold me and say sweet words

To kiss me so gentle

We connected easily

Understand where each one is coming from

I still remember the night we held hands and walked the sreets

How I pulled you in for a kiss

It all feels right

So new and so great

My friend, I hope we can continue like this

For us to never get into a fight

Just to stay simple and fun

Maybe even become one

Only time will tell.....


© 2011 Bloody_Stars

Author's Note

I think I ended it werid, but I hope you all still like it.

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I fully agree, it's the first sparks of love! :) Maybe change the last line though, it doesn't seem to flow with the rest of the poem. Either way, great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago

It was cute! But I kind of see what you are saying about the ending. The last line is good, but is kind of thrown in there last minute. Other than that, loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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2 Reviews
Added on September 26, 2011
Last Updated on September 26, 2011



San Diego, CA

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