You Know Nothing

You think you know all

You think you know me

False are all the things you hear

'Cause I'm more than what you think

You were wrong about things

And the things about me

But still I never cared

'Cause I'm bigger than what you think

You discredit me and lost my love

But still, I respect, for you're older

You stomped and destroyed me

But I killed you with all my kindness.

Reviews

[Court Steed-Oldwyn]

I think your last line is great! I would love to see more concrete images of how you're bigger than what this person thinks, what were they wrong about, how did they discredit you? If you can find a way to include one or two beautiful examples and details instead of quite so many vague statements this could be so great. Hold on to that last line for sure!!

[D Connolly]

great review, I agree. Keep it up Christian