underwater

underwater

A Poem by charlotte
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just a short poem about being underwater, i used this from a creative prompt.

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under the sea
a landscape
blue waves and weightless water
surrounding every move they make
small to large 
a contrast of fishes
swimming, gently, slowly
in a hurry under the sea
no heavy rocks 
flying freely like birds
passing the zero weight marshmallows in the sky 

© 2017 charlotte


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charlotte
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this is a very nice poem! love the imagery. made me feel peaceful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

charlotte

2 Years Ago

thankyou :-) glad you liked this .
Charlotte, quite relaxing to read. When I close my eyes and I can envision myself there. Very well written. Keep writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

charlotte

2 Years Ago

hello Taino, thankyou for commenting on my poem. I am glad you like this , and glad you found it rel.. read more
this might seem just a short poem but i think it's perfect the way it is. I love how you described what it's like underwater and you put it into words beautifully.

Please keep on writing, you're amazing!
-lostnstars

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

charlotte

2 Years Ago

hello lost n stars .. thankyou for taking the time to read this . i am glad you like this

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Added on December 19, 2017
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charlotte
charlotte

United Kingdom



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a creative girl who also loves to bake, and do yoga , i love fantasy books , i like to write poems, aswell as stories and i like to knit i also like reading other people's poems , i like painting , d.. more..

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