Weird

Weird

A Poem by Bobbiegirl

 

Yes,

My secret shame,

Shall I tell you?

It is something that I’ve been dying to tell you.

Once its out, I will be free.

 

But,

Maybe you might judge me,

Maybe you would hate me,

Maybe you would think I was weird.

 

No,

I trust you, I think I can share

I think I can share this now.

My secret shame is I really enjoy online…..confessions.

© 2009 Bobbiegirl


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Your writing has a really unique style that I'm coming to love. It's very....straight forward and honest. I don't know how to put it. There is a lot of personality and almost attitude in it. It feels more real than a lot of the stuff people write. Please keep it up. Your writing is refreshing and inspiring. It makes me want to write more so please keep writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like how this poem is a confession in and of itself and the tone of it really sets the poems feel. Wonderful work.

-S.

Posted 14 Years Ago


a nice confession to end off a great poem. secretive is right, this poem really makes you feel like you're being confided in

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great ending.... Confess away...Love it...
Simple but secretive at the same time..
Join some groups... I'll invite to a few
LeeLee Ryder started...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 17, 2009

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Bobbiegirl
Bobbiegirl

Pine Mountain Club, CA



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Hi and thanks for being interested. My name is Bobbie and I am suffering from empty nest syndrome and would love to make new friends. I like to write poetry, and short stories. Earlier this year I tri.. more..

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