Sparkle

When you see a little sparkle of hope in a relationship.

That sentence, the thought crossing your mind

That feeling deep down that's causing me bind

Your pulled in one way then slowly the next

Leaving your thoughts entrenched perplexed

The sparkle of intrigue that littlest of flare

Questioning your thoughts and creating dare

Can it be done together, will forever it last

Can I erase everything bad, stuck in my past

Just close your eyes and imagine a place

Where love and care are leading the race

A calming sea with a brightest sunset

Comforting thoughts all you can get

Dream you may ask? No is the reply.

Just two people who's feelings will fly

Sustaining words a mutual found home

Companionship sparkles free to roam

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

it is a good poem but the first line itself was incorrect it said "That sentence, the thought crossing you mind"
it should be "That sentence, the thought crossing your mind" but over all the poem was great amazingly written keep it up !!

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks for the great review and input. Sometimes writing raw tends to lead to errors in deployment. However I do thank you for pointing that out, it was nicely noted.

Thanks again for reading my stuff.

~Rob~

[Urja Gokani]

welcome :)