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A Poem by Bohrium Guy
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Seeing through a lovers eyes...

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Take my hand let me show some light

A place of rest, calm and love in sight

A real home, a palace - a place of share

A real meaning given to show we care


A note of forever not to be undone

Two hearts be connected love won

Where dreams become reality due

Life becomes a road of me and you


Where together we work as a team

Making decisions within our dream

Holding close the intimacy created

Forever sailing two souls well mated

© 2015 Bohrium Guy


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the roar is loud in a pure sweet hound, the hand taken without a sound

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, amazing and beautiful poem friend!! love it!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohrium Guy

8 Years Ago

Thank you Silver.
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

welcome friend!!!!!!!!!!!! ;)

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Added on November 20, 2015
Last Updated on November 20, 2015
Tags: Love, Soul Mates, romance

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Bohrium Guy
Bohrium Guy

Somewhere close...., OH



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