Perplexing Vision

A nightmare or a touch of visiting.... You decide.

Floating weightless,

time I feel nothing inside.

Air rushing past yet nothing felt,

Just visual streams of a silent movie reside.

Floating fast streams of images pass

I see her struggling, pain tossing wince

Anxiety grips my soul as I watch

Helpless without mass

Pictures flashing,

A torment in divide

Caged in feelings waiting anxiously

for resolution to abide

I speak but no vocals being released

My hands trying to reach her

To hold her sleeping flesh

But alas my grip is nothing but deceased

Tears stricken as they roll down her cheek

Fear I feel rippling multicolored

A contemplation of life or death

A failure held in bleak

Chained by form floating I can not help

my mind screaming intense

of the emotions incoming me

Gripping my soul, oh whelp

Silent sleep her mind dances full of thought

Events of close bore heavy price

In matters to be free

Pain shuttered horror of her confinement bought

Questioning the rights of being on her way

Freedom posing issues and angst

while guilt swirls heavy in her chest

She knows she will awaken for yet another day

As for me I am helpless, I only see the sight

visiting in my imagination maybe

A place she is held in prison

Awaken I come afraid of where I visited tonight

Reviews

[David Scott]

We all have a calling... Visions, dreams, premonitions all help guide us to our paths. Sometimes it is a warning within yourself and others times it is to prepare. Accepting our dreams, even the nightmares, allows us to find an empowering meaning.
Thank you for sharing.

[Bohrium Guy]

Oh you are so right.... its a gift or a curse but sometimes its like being blinded by the light and not knowing how to turn it off... Thanks for the review....

[Emily]

Great poem!
Keep on writing!!

[PHFASCES]

"As for me I am helpless, I only see the sight
visiting in my imagination maybe
A place she is held in prison
Awaken I come afraid of where I visited tonight"

I stand and applaud you. mind blown by this piece

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks Sam!

[Sarah]

I feel as though I live that every night...

[Bohrium Guy]

Time for change....

[Sarah]

Oh?... Is that bad?

[Bohrium Guy]

No just hinting :)