Dance With Me

Some thoughts on dancing with romance...

Lets dance slow and easy with heart,

Moving the night lovers without part.

Swaying to the rhythm of a romance,

Caressing the passions while we dance.

Holding each other softly the music flow,

Feeling the heartbeats gently beating glow.

Heat of the song and our lyrics are to be,

Stepping in sync to drumbeats internally.

The is no ending the song will remain,

Two lovers locked in a dance of reign.

Tis the care that binds our hearts content

Two people caring a time well spent.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Dance and good company. No better place to know.
"The is no ending the song will remain,
Two lovers locked in a dance of reign.
Tis the care that binds our hearts content
Two people caring a time well spent."
The above true and solid. Time well spent must be found for us to know real joy and happiness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Bohrium Guy]

Much appreciated brother...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my brother.

[barleygirl]

I really love this . . . nice message & good construction, too. The rhyme & flow & rhythm favor a message about dancing . . . suggesting movement on more levels than just physical. I especially like the line about "internal drumbeats" . . . thought-provoking.

[Bohrium Guy]

I am so glad you like this and thanks for the awesome review.

~Rob~

[Gee]

Lyrical, good rhyming, right up my street, well done

[Bohrium Guy]

I appreciate your review, thanks for taking the time to read my writes.

~Rob~

[Silmara McGarry]

Beautiful indeed! Wonderful rhymes and...Perfect lyrics for a song. Well done! :-)

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you I appreciate your review.

~Rob~

[Drama Child]

Love the flow! As a fan of rhyme this was very lyrical and enjoying for me! Nice read! Thanks for sharing!

[Bohrium Guy]

Its kinda the musician in me... being a guitarist and creator of lyrics. Thanks for the awesome review!

~Rob~

[Drama Child]

You're very welcome Rob! :)