My Biggest Regret

When you regret something or someone you left behind.....

I still remember walking the liberty grounds,
New York laughing with her voice sounds.
The look in her eyes and heart felt deep,
Sadly we parted our ways never to keep.

New Jersey singing an unforgettable tale,
Two hearts deep in love but never set sail.
Just a magical moment of the sweetest time,
Struck by feelings and a romance sublime.

Never will I forget that I said I didn't trust,
Crippled our union and led us to quickly bust.
If only by some faint spell or with a little luck,
To regain the ground and again be love struck.

She was the one the soul mate that I want,
Yet only a memory exists love she will shunt.
Her return would be a Christmas gift to end all,
Ending the regret and the greatest love fall.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Memory and regret. Always a secret place we hold close and dear.
"She was the one the soul mate that I want,
Yet only a memory exists love she will shunt.
Her return would be a Christmas gift to end all,
Ending the regret and the greatest love fall."
I do understand the above lines. Hard to forget the sweet taste of love. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Bohrium Guy]

Oh I could write a million lines through my experiences... LOL

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too my friend. Easy a million words.

[barleygirl]

You've done a great job of showing us how this life's biggest regret played out, complete with clear & unique details, yet everything relatable. In 2 or 3 places, I had to re-read to catch the meaning of your words, such as in stanza3/line1 -- seems like it could use a little tweaking. Balanced rhythm & good rhyming.

[Bohrium Guy]

Yes I believe it did need a tweak. Thanks for the review and helpful hand.

~Rob~