Stayed The Night

When two people just want the experience and trust in each other... I night alone together can be bliss with the right mixtures and person.

Stayed The Night

She came without words a silence deep,

Intentions well stated not wanting sleep.

Just hold me tight make me feel a heat,

Cherish our moment make it our treat.

Motions and passions released to sail,

Scratching and biting a lust to prevail.

Dancing a song two bodies slow pace,

Expressions of unity souls in embrace.

Touching and feeling each curve inset,

Gentle in strokes bodies are in sublet.

Hands shaken as ripples cause a fire,

Shutters of the richness held all desire.

Release came swiftly over and more,

Lovers surpassing a night of encore.

Waking dawn the time was well spent,

The deed done and no one will repent.

Reviews

[Alexa Apothic Red]

This is great read! I love your choice of words and how it unfolds. You tell a story and it is relevant. The intentions are clear. Kudos for explaining the explicit. It's lovely..

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you, most of my writes are pretty raw and come from a mood of time. Mostly I learned its when I feel the most my best expression comes out.

~Rob~

[Alexa Apothic Red]

I couldn't agree more. I find the most inspiration when my feelings are raw and the scenarios I'm in are rich with imagery themselves. It is a great writer who can draw from that experience and put all the unique thoughts and perspective about it down on paper... or screen.. as it were. For me, my most inspirational writing comes forth out of pain, heartbreak and out of instense passion. When I was younger I went out in search of these things and sabatoged my life "for the sake of my art" I would say.. now that I'm a little older.. I try to do less self-sabatoge, more reflection, perspective, story telling and daydreaming. But I do get what you're saying that you need the rawest feelings to birth a well expressed piece of writing.

[Bohrium Guy]

Most of my writes are more in longing or best when falling in love, however I do have moments of my dark side that slip out unexpected. Yes, I do agree I try to put my feeling into the visual imagery to draw the reader to feel what I felt when I wrote the words.

[Emily B]

good to read you, coming back a little as I can

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks Emily