Why, God, Why (Linzey's Song)

These are lyrics to a song i wrote for my choir exam. I wrote it about/for a friend of mine who is going through a rough time right now and i feel for her

(Verse 1)

I watch the pain                      

Through broken glass                

This feeling I have                

Refuses to pass            

I feel like I                               

Have to fix this place               

So why do I feel                  

Like I’m floating in space           

 

(Chorus) 

So why, God why?               

Though I know you’re there!           

Why, God why?               

Do I feel so scared?                       

And why on earth                

If I know you are with me           

Do I feel so alone               

Like you’re not there                

And you can’t see me             

Why, God, why?               

Why, God, why?               

 

(Verse 2)

I know you see her

Way up there

You watch her sadly

Through the air

You see her pain and

Shattered heart

So why does she feel

Disregard?

She’s lost and broken

Worn way down

I feel pain for her

Where are you now?

 

(Chorus)

So why, God why?               

Though I know you’re there!           

Why, God why?               

Do we feel so scared?                       

And why on earth                

If we know you are with us           

Do we feel so alone               

Like you’re not there                

And you can’t see us              

Why, God, why?               

Why, God, why?               

 

(Outtro thingy)

I know you see her, I know you care

Though we hear silence, you hear her prayer

You dry her eyes, Lord because you’re there

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think! God bless.

Reviews

[Taylor]

This is BEAUTIFUL!!! love this song...

[Jessie]

Thank yah :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

So beautiful, yes God sees our pain and hears our prayers and He is our comfort and our strength. A lovely song I hope your friend is ok.

[Jessie]

Shes doing better :)
So true and thanks for the review! God bless!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :) God Bless you too x

[RachelReaper]

The first lyrics "I watch the pain through broken glass" really drew me into the rest of the song. I think you should get an A with a thousand pluses on your exam!

[Jessie]

I actually did get an A on that exam cuz i wrote it myself instead of doing a cover haha :P
Thank you haha ^_^

[Xanthurion]

i can really feel the emotion and that is the most important thing (in my opinion).

[Jessie]

I agree :) Emotion is a huge part of music or writing in general!
Thanks for the review :3

[Lily Mae]

I think it's beautifully said.. The wonder and wanting to believe...the trust in knowing is all here.. Wonderful penning..x

[Jessie]

Thanks for reading it :3

[Jordan's Back]

This is beautiful I would love to make a musical accompanament to thi if I can? This is bloody awesome. :)

[Jessie]

Whatever floats your boat :) Thank you ^_^