Seiðr

Seiðr

A Poem by Summer boy
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The time might time might:
The pace back and forth;
Of his plans and causes;
Offing of trueness -- false gospels.

Measure of a new age,
A song or the days;
Measure of the newness --
The song of the next.

Juvenile children
Will grow up, will be.
Serenity of future
Will be.

© 2020 Summer boy


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Summer boy
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To give a title can be sometimes more difficult then write poem it self. Sometimes I put what first came to my head after when I finish writing. Title is one thing what can make poem attractive and unique . And also is happen I make great title but poem is sucks .

This is for me like from dark ages will arise new hope . I wonder if this writing reflect current political social events. You are not clear which give reader to put own views on your words. First stanza can be about some leader who is not sure which step is better to make. Like elephant in porcelain shop. Make more harm then healing. At second stanza there is some moving of new ideas or ways. Slowly preparation for future what will be if everything is ready. What come to my mind maybe title can be Seer in mist of future .

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3 Years Ago

Can I ask what that Norse name actually means. And are you interested in Norse mythology . I find qu.. read more
Summer boy

3 Years Ago

My mind first went to seerer from your review. Then I remember, seerer is also a surname, I was goin.. read more
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3 Years Ago

Thanks for nice explanation it's feels more like poem. Beautiful journey of discovery.



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To give a title can be sometimes more difficult then write poem it self. Sometimes I put what first came to my head after when I finish writing. Title is one thing what can make poem attractive and unique . And also is happen I make great title but poem is sucks .

This is for me like from dark ages will arise new hope . I wonder if this writing reflect current political social events. You are not clear which give reader to put own views on your words. First stanza can be about some leader who is not sure which step is better to make. Like elephant in porcelain shop. Make more harm then healing. At second stanza there is some moving of new ideas or ways. Slowly preparation for future what will be if everything is ready. What come to my mind maybe title can be Seer in mist of future .

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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3 Years Ago

Can I ask what that Norse name actually means. And are you interested in Norse mythology . I find qu.. read more
Summer boy

3 Years Ago

My mind first went to seerer from your review. Then I remember, seerer is also a surname, I was goin.. read more
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3 Years Ago

Thanks for nice explanation it's feels more like poem. Beautiful journey of discovery.

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Added on August 30, 2020
Last Updated on September 2, 2020

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11th of September, 2020 There's been a big change. And it is for....it is a hope right now. We people have to make sure that things would go right. And so, sadly, I would have to take a break from .. more..

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