If i lose her

If i lose her

A Poem by Boy of the red

If i lose her,
i will never cease to cry,
if i lose her,
i will surly die.
If i lose her touch,
i will never feel.
if i lose her smile,
i shall never smile.
if i lose her "I love you"s,
i will never it from anyone.
if i lose her flirty jokes,
i shall never laugh.
if i lose her ear,
i will never speak.
if i lose her support,
i shall always fall.
if i lose her,
nothing will matter.
if i lose her,
i shall never be seen.
if i lose her....
Just please never go...

© 2012 Boy of the red


Author's Note

Boy of the red
i wrote this at like 3 am when i lied awake worrying i was going to lose the love of my life. we are ok now, which i am so lucky for.

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that's really sweet, she better hold onto you c': great poem too!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Boy of the red

11 Years Ago

haha thank you! its i who needs to hold ontop her haha
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Pax
that's good you both are ok... this poem is really sweet..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Boy of the red

11 Years Ago

thank you my friend
this was so sweet and was an honest not holding back anything kind of emotion, and I'm glad to hear you two are okay now.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Boy of the red

11 Years Ago

Thank you
hehe as you wish:]

Although it's different from your usual stuff..I absolutely love it!
It flows, it's beautiful, left me speechless:]

Keep it up babe

Posted 11 Years Ago


Boy of the red

11 Years Ago

Dedicated to you baby.
Awwww sweetie... how adorable! I'm glad everything is okay. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Boy of the red

11 Years Ago

Thank you! You have been like a big sis to me on here :)
That_Girl

11 Years Ago

Awwww :'D you're too sweet.
aww this is really sweet and beautiful ...good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


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afra

11 Years Ago

no prob

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