Climb For Survival

I feel...like this.

Her tears fall down like rain from the sky.
It doesn't matter what she does she hears goodbye.
So to a poetic world she’ll try to escape.
But even the words written on the page will not work.
She doesn't understand why they say what they do.
She tries to not let it bother her…
But the words swirl around inside her pretty little head.
A fake smile fades as she lay alone in bed.
Nobody wants to hear how she feels.
She’s there for them, even for him.
“What can I do?” she whispers to herself.
“But fall slowly and pretend that I can climb.”

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hmm it is sad how sometimes we make others feel like this with what we say or do. We all have to be careful what we say and do because it might just come back and bite us in the bum later and then we will know how it feels. That is why it's good to be kind and loving, so then we can have good feelings come back to us hopefully.

Great Job

[Broken Porcelain]

Thank you, and I totally agree. It is much easier for me to be loving now, than regret my unforgivable actions later.

[Elvis Gilley]

Imagery was great. I love your VOICE it is insightful and full of passion the two best ingredients for poets. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.e

[Zap-the-awesome]

Know how this feels. Sometimes ya just gotta close your eyes and keep moving forward. Excellent writing

[Broken Porcelain]

Trying to do just that. Some days are better than others! Thank you.

[Debbie_Philly]

So sad.... so deeply felt... very well written... and I just want to give you a huge hug... keep writing sweetie !!

[Broken Porcelain]

Thank you-definitely will =)

[Nemesis G]

I feel like this a lot of the time too, writing is my escape and it does help sometimes. Stay strong and thank you for sharing it was beautifully written.

[Broken Porcelain]

Thank you

[char]

Writing is my outlet too. It actually works, but sometimes, I wish it would work more.

[Broken Porcelain]

I agree. The last year especially has been very difficult for me. I hope you find another outlet you help even more. Try dabbing in art?

[Areeba]

It's amazing how we keep on pretending to be OK when we are breaking inside, it's a great piece, thank you for sharing it!!!

[Broken Porcelain]

I am famous for that, haha. I never want to be seen as weak, even though I have every reason to be weak. Thank you, glad you enjoyed.