If i make you see...

...if you saw the flaws

If i make you see...

I wake you to knowing me

Wholly me

The fears; my demons

The pain; my pleasure

My weakness; you treasure

If i make you see...

My flaws; the uncertainties

My dreams; all fantasies 

Opening 'ur heart to things you cant see

& your eyes to which thine heart could not feel

Thy eyes shall be held hostage

And the mind at a rampage

By adventures that could only be salvaged 

through dreams

Reviews

[Diane]

'My flaws; the uncertainties
My dreams; all fantasies'

"Opening 'ur heart to things you cant see"

Those lines just up fight up to you. I really liked it. Nice job.

[Bra.Kofi]

thank you very much. appreciated