the woman is a god

she carries her head high
wears her crown and dashes her gown
her mind sees the world different
her spirit is liberated from self hate
for the heart’s sake
there’s a girl in every woman
and an err in every human
lively,
yet formidable;
she carries her persona

she carries her head high
obedient to her instincts and true to her descent
she seeks no validation
but to be respected and treated rightly
and from all, her acceptation
of the true god she really is
even with all this power
she never loses touch with her primeval feelings of love and emotions

Reviews

[Diane]

I read another poem almost a year ago and I enjoyed it. It looks like everything gets better with time. Great job! I will be watching for more to come.

[JoffytheRay]

deep and precise, great piece

[Bra.Kofi]

thank you joffytheray for the review