Poisoned Love

Poisoned Love

A Poem by Breaga O'Callaghan
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History will repeat...

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You hold the past in your hands,

Old beauty preserved through time.

I love you, yet you remind me of my regrets,

Mistakes I made, and cannot deny.

Your eyes gaze through hers,

Seeing me for the first time.

And history will repeat itself,

The fault, once again mine.

He stole your heart, like he did with her,

And it was me whom you suddenly hated.

But when you weren’t around him,

You became confused and disoriented.

And you discovered you loved both of us,

Each in a different way.

And although it was a stupid choice,

You wanted both of us to stay.

But the past appeared in the present,

And the past, she did then die.

You gave your life for both of us,

And the truth was what became of that lie.

Now I hold your still body in my arms,

The tears down my cheeks freely flowing.

And I would live on, forever hating him,

Not knowing that in your heart, it was me you had chosen.

© 2012 Breaga O'Callaghan


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Breaga O'Callaghan
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this is so, so sad. extremely well done, i love the emotion you've portrayed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A powerful poem with a lot of internal struggle and hidden story. Every decision we make good and bad. We will pay for in pleasure or pain. I like the stories in this poem. I like the ending. Left the reader with question and thoughts. Thank you the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


The last line is beautiful. As is the whole poem, I have nothing bad to say. I honestly love this poem. Sharing and adding to my library.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Breaga O'Callaghan
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Hi, I'm Breaga O'Callaghan. (My name is a pen name, and not my real name). I am 15 years old and an avid reader and writer. more..

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