Blood

Blood

A Poem by BreannaAutumn

They say your life flashes before your eyes when death is near
But I don't see the people I love
I only see the ones that have left me forever
Never to laugh with me again
Because I could never be better than who I am

I don't feel any beautiful emotions
I only feel the wrenching pain of heartbreak
The one that left me detached from the world
Because one day I lost the right to love him

I don't taste the sweetest candies
I only taste my bitter blood
The last thing left of me
Because it's drowning me away

I don't hear my favorite melody
I only hear the voice that haunts me
The cold barren whimper for help
Because nobody can hear me screaming inside

© 2013 BreannaAutumn


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You have the deepest feeling I have ever read about I enjoyed getting to know about you through your poetry Best group I have read so far and I been reading a lot lately.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this piece! Deep and dark, just my kind of stuff. Well done

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 23, 2013
Last Updated on September 30, 2013
Tags: pain, death, loss

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BreannaAutumn
BreannaAutumn

Rathdrum, ID



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Hey everyone. I'm Breanna and I'm 19 years old. I'm a college student. I'm bisexual, so you will find alternating genders in my writing. If you write a review on a piece of mine I will do the same for.. more..

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