Heartbeat

dedicated to my brother's and his girlfriend's miscarriaged child

To the soul that came from heaven

you will always be a blessing

In disguise, you might be

but at one time your heart had beat

Your mother loved you very much

she knew she did at that first nudge

so packed tight in her womb

but in her heart there's always room

Your father was so happy

when he learned you'd be here

safe with him you'd always be

now even safer in his memories

Though we may not have known you

we knew you in our hearts

Beautiful you'll always be

no matter how fast we had to part

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Quick as a heartbeat the moment was gone we slowly move on and found away to get along. Great writings.

[Trace]

very powerful poem, well written. Trace

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very sad an emotional peace, really touches your heart this one.
Very heartbreaking story really sucks that this is actually true.
I liked this peace allot i don't like kids but that doesn't matter this is very sad and im very sorry for there loss/and yours :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Heartbreaking and depressing... As a woman, I think I know just how losing a baby hurts so much. Unimaginable pain. The kind of hell no woman wants to go through.

[WithLoveandLoss.]

A letter to a loved one gone too soon. Very impactful, very intricate and complex. Love it!

[Melissa Ridge]

This was a heartbreaking piece, the ending hit me hard.

[ayosonolowo]

nice one, i love the rhythm. Keep up.