Atoms

Just my thoughts

When I die

 I'd like to evaporate into the air

All of my being, body and soul

 broken down into atoms

 My family wouldn't have to see my carcass

 lying lifeless in that old room

that always felt empty to me

I could be free to roam the earth,

 all of it, 

and have fragments of me throughout this world

 I could collect on my mothers clothes

 and stay with her forever

 or melt down into the oceans

 and find peace in the stillness of the sands

 I could become a cloud

 and peer down onto the earth

 with my unrelenting hatred for it,

or I could disperse into the solar system

 and become lost in the unknown

 My atoms could be a million places at once

 and no one 

could ever 

break me

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Be strong support of friends and loved ones will set you free. Beautiful write

[Saddam]

When I die
I'd like to evaporate into the air
All of my being, body and soul
broken down into atoms.

Beautiful and different by others. A touching thought dear.....

[don't know]

I like this the, subject matter of death is sad but also I feel hope if that makes sense. I like the idea of becoming atoms any thing is possible. " my atoms could be a million places at once,and no one could ever break me". Interesting write.