Without Limit

I'd like to live in fairytales 

Where the ending is never near

 Where I can play my favorite parts 

Till I've had my fill

 I'd like to forget the present

 And go back in time 

Where the problems don't exist

 Or skip forward

 To when the heartaches end 

I'd like to pause time

 And marvel in the moment 

Drinking in the world

 without limits 

I'd like to make a story 

So beautiful and free

 And I can go back and change

Where it need be

 I'd like to throw away the parts I don't like 

And fill them in with greatness

 I'd like to forever live with my loved ones

 The ones that had always been 

And never have to part

 I'd like to fall in love 

With the person of my dreams

 And live in perfect harmony 

With no fears of the unseen

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

Perfect Utopian world dream like love what you have written down my dear quit the poetess in the making enjoying what I am seeing here nice of you to have shared.

[lyss]

I've been there and your poem really conveys your hopes and dreams:) good read keep it up!:)

[A. Amos]

I love the positive approach in your beautiful poem, keep the same vibe and God willing all your dreams would come true:)

Enjoyable read!