I bow to you sir. This is a touching, deeply moving tribute to Princess Diana and her sons. Poetically magnificent account of the scene and the aftermath of The World's Princess and her tragic death. Great minimalist form that adds to the impact of each word. The Princes' selflessness and suffering. They are indeed noble sons of a Princess mother. Thank you for this heart-felt work.
And I curtsy to you, Annette.
Thank you for explaining what this poem made you feel in respo.. read moreAnd I curtsy to you, Annette.
Thank you for explaining what this poem made you feel in response and your critical comments.
I appreciate the irony of this sorry tale and as the father of a nine year old son who has seven weeks ago lost his mother, the recent memorial of Lady Diana's death and her sons' majestic response to it all, struck me emotionally in a strong way.
Particularly, the motivation for this work was to highlight that act of giving, and to realise that this act symbolises a forgiveness of the public, whom it would have been for years, perhaps seemingly impossible for the princes not to blame for their mother's death. Theirs was an inspiring act of selflessness and reconciliation, reflecting their mother's nature. (But you read all that anyway!)
Annette, thank you, as always, for your honest and endorsing encouragement.
And, I might take this opportunity, if they're reading, to apologise for all the breaking of those drug laws their Grandmother had set forth to enforce amongst those of us within her realm!
7 Years Ago
Brett I am so very sorry For your loss. It must be so hard for you and your young son. My prayers ar.. read moreBrett I am so very sorry For your loss. It must be so hard for you and your young son. My prayers are with you both. Yes, i understand how personally felt this was for you now. The Princes demonstrated the sweet, noble and giving nature they inherited from their dear mother. They stood as fine young men- and they forgave.Your poem is so deeply evocative of this. Oh yes-You are so funny about breaking the Queen's drug laws-ha! Always a pleasure to read your work my friend. Blessings , healing and peace wished for you and your son...
I tip my hat to you sir, a wonderfully written piece, sad, stark, moving.
What a loss to the world but even more so to the two boys
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7 Years Ago
Gee, you are too kind and it is sadly true that it was only the power of the story of a loss so sad,.. read moreGee, you are too kind and it is sadly true that it was only the power of the story of a loss so sad, stark, moving and tragic for both the world and to that Lady's children which compulsively drew my pen to it, demanding expression.
I bow to you sir. This is a touching, deeply moving tribute to Princess Diana and her sons. Poetically magnificent account of the scene and the aftermath of The World's Princess and her tragic death. Great minimalist form that adds to the impact of each word. The Princes' selflessness and suffering. They are indeed noble sons of a Princess mother. Thank you for this heart-felt work.
And I curtsy to you, Annette.
Thank you for explaining what this poem made you feel in respo.. read moreAnd I curtsy to you, Annette.
Thank you for explaining what this poem made you feel in response and your critical comments.
I appreciate the irony of this sorry tale and as the father of a nine year old son who has seven weeks ago lost his mother, the recent memorial of Lady Diana's death and her sons' majestic response to it all, struck me emotionally in a strong way.
Particularly, the motivation for this work was to highlight that act of giving, and to realise that this act symbolises a forgiveness of the public, whom it would have been for years, perhaps seemingly impossible for the princes not to blame for their mother's death. Theirs was an inspiring act of selflessness and reconciliation, reflecting their mother's nature. (But you read all that anyway!)
Annette, thank you, as always, for your honest and endorsing encouragement.
And, I might take this opportunity, if they're reading, to apologise for all the breaking of those drug laws their Grandmother had set forth to enforce amongst those of us within her realm!
7 Years Ago
Brett I am so very sorry For your loss. It must be so hard for you and your young son. My prayers ar.. read moreBrett I am so very sorry For your loss. It must be so hard for you and your young son. My prayers are with you both. Yes, i understand how personally felt this was for you now. The Princes demonstrated the sweet, noble and giving nature they inherited from their dear mother. They stood as fine young men- and they forgave.Your poem is so deeply evocative of this. Oh yes-You are so funny about breaking the Queen's drug laws-ha! Always a pleasure to read your work my friend. Blessings , healing and peace wished for you and your son...
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