The Sea

Wind frisked
wave
piles of
fine drops
blown,

toppled
sideways

horizontal
white
spray

over
green
sheet

Being,

also
disturbed

Constantly,
from
beneath.










 
 

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Wonderful imagery and flow to this poem. “Wind frisked wave” - lovely alliteration. The ocean’s restlessness described well at the end. Well- written!

[Brett Hernan]

Thank you, Annette.
I thought you would enjoy it.
Your appreciation is reciprocated, always, with an added affection for your encouraging comments.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Your words are welcome and always my pleasure to read Brett!