The List

The List

A Poem by Brianetics

i carry around a list

in my head
of people i wouldn't
mind seeing dead
 
it ebbs and flows
on any given day
wishes granted
changes of heart
 
but at the bottom
there is a space
a name written
and erased
 
rewritten and erased
so many times
it has become
almost illegible
 
i almost forget
whose name it is
the last on my list
even though it is mine
 
 
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© 2009 Brianetics


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Wow that's really dark. Hope I'm not on your list! LoL. Seriously people can be frustrating. I think we all carry lists. Good simplistic write. It flowed very well. Thanks!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 12, 2009

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Brianetics
Brianetics

Laguna Hills, CA



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