Just A Girl

Just A Girl

A Poem by Brittany
"

Sometimes I just need a little boost in my confidence.

"
People stop,
and stare and whisper.
I can hear their voices, 
behind me murmur.
How ugly, she says.
She runs like a turtle.
Aren't you normal?

But guess what?
I'm just a girl.
And no matter what they say, 
And no matter what they do.

I will dream.
I will have that first crush.
And I will laugh,
And I will play.

And if you think
That I'm not cool.
I won't care, because,
I am me.
And I am unique.

I'm Just A Girl.

© 2012 Brittany


Author's Note

Brittany
The usual, criticism is welcomed. Ignore the grammar. I am an amateur writer, just getting my thoughts out.

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brittany, yet again, this poem is just absolutely wonderful. Very relatable this is something nearly everybody has to go through and its nice for others to hear that they are not the onlu ones out there. exceptional feeling. I have a friend who is very close to me, practically a sister, who maybe, should read this on over a few times. exceptional, unique, and as for the literacy poryion of it, always your a very good writer, the only thing i noticed was the syllables, kind of made the beat a tad uneven, but who am i to judge. maybe you were going for that effect

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittany

11 Years Ago

I know :( The syllables were kinda jacked up but I honestly don't care for I was just trying to get .. read more
Annabelle Lee

11 Years Ago

And that you did, do not be discouraged by that, a lot of times i will look at poems in my notebook .. read more
This is sweet and also tugs at my heart. I love it. The title drew me in and loved it all. I love how at the end she knows her worth!
Wonderful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittany

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Theresa

11 Years Ago

You are very welcome!

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Well, I'm Brittany. I'm going to be an eighth grader next school year. I'm not a HUGE writer but when one of my odd little ideas pops into my head I have to get it out. So now i'm copying from my j.. more..

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