7 Days

7 Days

A Poem by Broken.

For seven days there has been something, a small indifferent feeling of pain.

DAY ONE:

Hopped on a ride to the sky after making a pit-stop in hell.

 

DAY TWO:

Felt the need to sink lower than low after being ignored by satan.

 

DAY THREE:

Got too excited about nothing. My hopes drifted toward the sky, taking me along with it.

 

DAY FOUR:

Went on an adventure to my grave in the ocean.

 

DAY FIVE:

Walked one flight, two, six staircases down to hell. And I didn't trip once.

 

DAY SIX:

Went too low. Bled out underground. People thought I went missing.

 

DAY SEVEN:

Went so high, I hit the ground.

 

Then... darkness...

© 2009 Broken.


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i really like this, it was creative how you made it in a diary form. and your symbolism is amazing

"DAY FIVE:

Walked one flight, two, six staircases down to hell. And I didn't trip once."
this is my favorite part, it's very powerful

Posted 14 Years Ago



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