Miles Between Us

Miles Between Us

A Poem by Brooklyn

I met him on a two week journey
I haven’t seen him since 
Now we are miles apart 
And only Facebook Friends 
I don’t know why, I’m so confused 
But my feelings for him are on the loose 
I can’t contain the feelings I get
When I think of him, can’t get him out of my head
He made me laugh and always smile
He was polite and everything I ever wanted
But now he’s gone
So far away 
My heart still aches 
To go back to those two weeks
To see his face, to hold his hand
To kiss his cheek, and make more memories again
I wonder if he feels it too
The same gravity that fills my world 
The gravity that’s so hard to fight 
The pull towards him
The flames of desire that ignite
If I knew that he did 
If he felt this same way
Nothing would stop me
I’d jump on the next plane
To fly to where he is
I’d travel anywhere
Just to find him and tell him
Everything that I feel 
To tell him I’ve fallen
And he’s all I want
I want him to hold me
To kiss me every night
To love me more passionately
Than even romance authors write
But the silence still exists between us
The miles that separate us are real 
Oh if I could just see him and tell him
And spark my dream into real life
I’d finally be happy 
My broken pieces would be healed 
Nothing else would matter
He would be my whole world 

© 2014 Brooklyn


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"To kiss me every night/To love me more passionately/Than even romance authors write.." wow that's saying a lot. I remember feeling this way a couple of weeks ago, not that I am not curious about my feelings of struggle for the understanding of love, but something came in the way, my dreams and the lack of response, it sounds like you are very loved so much and I love love itself, if only we can all figure what it means each moment when we do not have someone that wants us in that way, though I have to say, it has changed for me since seeing the child that loves so much, we miss out on others loves and I pray to God he will show me how to process love, to understand what a life without romance means? Must any of us give it up? Why? What is the love beyond it? What is it manifested, how do find love again? Will it be someone we know are married to, then yes, should it not be? What is this life with all it's various forms of rejection we devise for it? Just our meanderings, the way one thing takes precedence or seems to take precedence over another.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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impulsiveyetheartfelt!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


impulsiveyetheartfelt!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


"To kiss me every night/To love me more passionately/Than even romance authors write.." wow that's saying a lot. I remember feeling this way a couple of weeks ago, not that I am not curious about my feelings of struggle for the understanding of love, but something came in the way, my dreams and the lack of response, it sounds like you are very loved so much and I love love itself, if only we can all figure what it means each moment when we do not have someone that wants us in that way, though I have to say, it has changed for me since seeing the child that loves so much, we miss out on others loves and I pray to God he will show me how to process love, to understand what a life without romance means? Must any of us give it up? Why? What is the love beyond it? What is it manifested, how do find love again? Will it be someone we know are married to, then yes, should it not be? What is this life with all it's various forms of rejection we devise for it? Just our meanderings, the way one thing takes precedence or seems to take precedence over another.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely piece. Its something I can relate to! I can feel the emotion behind it. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is lovely! At some level I can relate to this piece! I love that it tells a story.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brooklyn

9 Years Ago

Thank you!

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A Poem by Brooklyn