J'attendre

Trail

For what I do not know
For who I do not know
My heart slow sinks
with every breath I draw
Mais j'attendre

The memories still ripe
they slay my mind
ripping me up in pieces
The memories thaw
Mais j'attendre

I miss your touch
but I see it fade
long into the distance
forcing me to withdraw
mais j'attendre

But I can't move on
My heart is stuck,
An uncertain melancholy
my heart is in awe
mais J'attendre

Tout jour j'attendre,
pour toi, mon cheri
meme apres mon mort
Tout jours, je vais attendre,
parceque, je commence à comprendre

Author's Note

I wanted to try something in another language! So here it is!
And I want to continue it aswell, so if there are any french speakers out there, please please read and review "/
Feedback would be so nice! This was the first 'international' poem I've done, so what do you think?

Translation:
J'attendre = I wait
Mais = But

Tout jour j'attendre, [All day I wait]
pour toi, mon cheri [for you, my sweetie]
meme apres mon mort [even after my death]
Tout jours, je vais attendre, [everyday I will wait]
parceque, je commence à comprendre [because, im starting to understand]

Reviews

[Raivenne]

Oooh la la! Excellent job of combing languages, "beacuse I'm starting to understand" Beautiful!

[Voice11]

Amazing! I am taking french classes but did have to be reminded a bit. I will follow any international ones you do! this was a great piece!

[Katie Louise Hughes]

This was sooo beautiful. French is a beautiful language already, and I think you did a great job incorporating it into your poem! Thanks :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem even with the language that I don't understand. The flow is easy to follow and the emotion is completely understood. Great write.

[Prateeksha Khot]

Thanks or giving the translation.
It is always good to try writing in other languages and though i dont know french, I still liked this poem a lot