I can't

I can't

A Poem by BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown
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I wrote this one just after I was told that my ex was moving with both of our children 10-11 hours away from where I live. It could have been worse and much further but after seeing them almost everyday since they had been born, it was as if my world was

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I can’t...                       I can’t...
I need...                       I need...
Don’t take away...
Wait.... I can’t brea...
 
Let me think... Let me breathe
I don’t know how...
But I still need...
Why can’t you do...
Cause I was about to...
Oh God... Oh please...
 
I can’t...                       I can’t...
I need...                       I need...
I thought this would...
Wait.... please...
 
So what about... And then how
What are they gonna do now...
How do I...
When do they...
But... Why... May...
I ask... I say...
 
I can’t...                       I can’t...
I wish...                        I cry...
Cause here comes...
a life of cyclic goodbye...

© 2008 BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown


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just golden! :)

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