A Relapse

A Relapse

A Poem by BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown

 

too many times
has my confidence begun
and ended
within these lines
 
too many fears
have rashed my revelations
and rusted
my plans’ gears
 
too many sighs
well up in my eyes
and choke
my cloudy skies
 
and still I grind
I thrash the despair from my skin
I wrench my soul for more passion than befo’
post the placards of
“I”
on every wall
offer a heap of
“who I be”
on every word
‘til a grain of
“me”
could boil the sea
‘til a thought of
“myself”
tattoos all who see
and memories of
“my voice”

                            become soul therapy

© 2008 BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown


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I read it twice....amd my response was ooooohhhhhh weeeeee!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is neatly written in ryhme, interesting technique and lay out. Simple and thereputic. The only thing I found difficult to follow was the lay out because it forced my eyes to sway and made me feel naucious lol.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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