Wielded Scar

Wielded Scar

A Poem by BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown

 

I don't battle for my survival
rather my sanity
my middle class maddness envelopes me
emotional disconnect from
      my sons, my promised love
disconnect to divorce
separated to exodus enforced
so my mind is still reeling
my 2 year tears I'm still feeling
yet I still walk loves road of toll
yet I still live in love and love the role
yet I still long for the purity of change
yet I still long for my pain rearranged
cause my unchanged mistakes caused my riot
and forced my anger far beyond quiet
now I search within without fear
with hope determined not to push those near
too far and manage to keep clear
who I am and who they are
who I'm to become and still kiss the scar...

© 2008 BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown


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I think you nailed it, if that was what they were asking for. You have an ability to give a tangible accounting of life as you know it. Nothing's better than being able to read a poet and tell that it comes from within the soul.

Excellent piece of writing.

Keep scribing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Engineer by day, passionate poet during all points in between... Sex, love, music, life, movies, and my loving wife Adrianne inspire my moments of poetic bliss. Hoping to improve my writing a.. more..

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