Babe You Wanna?

guys all girls should avoid

Babe, you wanna go on a date?

I'm playing online, can't this wait?

Babe, you wanna go for a walk?

I'm shooting zombies babe, can't talk

Babe, you wanna go to the mall?

I can't go now, my rank will fall

Babe, you wanna see a movie?

I said I'm playing call of duty

 

She sits there puzzled, no more questions

She racks her brain for more suggestions

To cure him of this game infection

What could she do to make a scene?

 To make his eyes leave the screen

She tried one last thing, before she left

Her last resort, her final test

 

Babe, you wanna go upstairs?

I'm coming babe, I'll be right there

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

It can be a write of humor but is actually more of a serious one. I like it and I like how you said "guys all girls should avoid." There needs to be time, love, and respect as well in a relationship, which you showed well in this poem; of course among other things needed in a relationship too.

[Child of God]

exactly my point thank you :)

[koty bell]

Going upstairs or video games hmmmmmm??? Tough decision jk not really! :-P this was awesome great humor and actually alot of truth and life lessons to this as well fellas if u have a girl and u love her put down the controller and show u love her more

[Child of God]

amen to that lol

[koty bell]

right? Lol

[Child of God]

yes sir lol

[koty bell]

Have been showing u love all night on ur work..think u could check out some of mine?

[Child of God]

yeah sounds good bro

[koty bell]

Cool man thx alot :-)

[Child of God]

you're welcome :)

[Kenaz]

Laughter...that is all I have...

[Child of God]

glad I could help :P

[Calibaster]

Dude! I would have played with him! I love video games! ;)

[Child of God]

sounds like a good plan lol

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice rhyming poem...Thank you for penning...:)................

[Child of God]

anytime :P

[Sami Khalil]

:)......................

[Brennaj]

This made me giggle. It was very well written. I ended up caving with my ex and became a gamer myself! If you can't beat 'em, join 'em!

[Child of God]

Ikr lol :P

[Jordan]

Funny lines but to some extent true.... :)

[Child of God]

Thank you lol :P

[Dreamer]

great write, and very true.
it's hard to get guys out from in front of a computer or television screen. I don't mind them playing video games though, It's a good way to release any stress or anger they are dealing with.
Anyways, nicely written and good rhyming.

[Child of God]

Thank you :)

[Dreamer]

you're very welcome. I look forward to reading more. You are a very talented writer (:

[Child of God]

You just made my day :)

[Dreamer]

Well I'm glad (:

[Abdul Aziz]

Haha, very well written! The rhyming was superb, and exactly suited to this type of poetry. Although my girlfriend just leaves me alone at times like these.

[Child of God]

Thanks lol that means a lot and I bet she does lol most girls know that guys are in their own world when its gaming time

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, clever, sometimes that doesn't even work!

[Child of God]

this was actually inspired by stories I've heard about these types of events lol

[Frieda P]

Sure it was lol ;-)

[Child of God]

I swear lol, whenever i'm with a lady I always show her the attention she deserves :P

[Frieda P]

He doth protest too much....hahah I believe you. ;-P

[Child of God]

Good :) cause it's true lol

[Frieda P]

Apparently you don't know me, that was sarcasm 101 lol

[Child of God]

it's harder to tell when it's typed lol

[Frieda P]

I know, that's why I figured I'd clue you in lol

[Child of God]

well thanks lol