My Little Girl :)

a dream I had, and I can't wait to make a reality :P

One night I had an amazing dream

Of a room so bright, I could barely see

There was no carpet, or hard wood floors

Just long white walls, no windows or doors

In the center there stood an adorable little girl

Who would smile at me as if I was her world

I asked what her name was, but she just shrugged

When I knelt down to talk, she gave me a hug

I said I don't mean to be rude, but it feels weird to hug you

She said why is that daddy?, you know that I love you

I said I love you too princess, my little bundle of joy

Then I took her hand, and we played with her toys

I loved how the light would make her eyes twinkle

And how her cute little laugh would make her nose crinkle

Her hands were so soft, much smoother than silk

And she loved to blow bubbles in her chocolate milk

I awoke from the dream right after I kissed her

In a matter of minutes, I already missed her

I could never replace the way she made me feel

I'll treasure that day when she's actually real

Until then I'll be waiting, with a smile to greet you

On that wonderful day, when I finally meet you

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Blank]

That is adorable, I love little kids, they're my favorite people, they see the world so differently. I have a little girl, she's almost 4 and you mentioned one of my favorite things!

I do this silly voice for her, when we're playing with toys or just to make her laugh, and she always crinkles up her little nose when she tells me I'm being silly, so I love that you mentioned that. You paint a beautiful picture here. Lovely poem, thank you for sharing.

[David]

Thank you so much :) and I hope you and your little girl have a wonderful and happy life :P

[MOON]

Beautiful heartfelt write full of joy .

[David]

Thank you lol

[Bob Sherunkle]

that was a little heartbreaking man.Hopefully it's a dream of things to come.

[David]

I really hope you're right lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

this is a truly wonderful piece of writing.You are really talented ,write on.

[David]

Thank you :)

[Kelechi Awoms]

Another good piece
Keep it up

[David]

Thank you :P

[Lover Of Words]

When you finally do come to that day when you finally get to meet this little one make sure that when shes is old enough have her read this it will fill her eyes with tears of beauty just like you did when i read it lovely job

[David]

I'll be sure to do that :) thank you mam

[Lover Of Words]

Its my pleasure beautiful job

[Ruth]

Oh, this is beautifully voiced! An emotive piece...moved me :)

[David]

Thank you mam :)

[Ruth]

My pleasure :)

[David]

Oh how wonderful you write, you have just a fantastic way with words... was instantly touched by this....

So good! thank you for sparkling such a beautiful dream on Writers Cafe.... made me smile from ear to ear..... :)

- Elisa

[David]

You just made my day :) thank you so much!!

You're most welcome, your work is good! :)

[koty bell]

This was really great man really love ur writing! Hope to be as good one day...u absolutely killed this one solid work on this my man...

[David]

All you have to do is let your soul tell the story and your heart write the words man that's all it takes

[koty bell]

Alright well thats pretty much how i do it already...now all i have to do is get as good as u lol

[Kenaz]

First poem I have read of yours and you already made my night. I may be on to something, touching piece of angelic foresight

[David]

You just made my night!! thank you so much! :P