See with your Heart

The line "Only the blind can truly see" has been floating around in my head for a while, so I decided to put it some where.

Only through the blind can we truly see the world.
Shun your eyes,
See with you heart.

Numb your senses and listen

Agony, screams, crying.
They cry for you.

Close your eyes, open your heart and speak with your soul.
Spread the word, help them see.
This pain must stop.

Here. Now. Today

Author's Note

Didn't really go for any rhyme or rhythm scheme.
Sooo....

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

That was pretty good! I loved the concept of 'Only through the blind can we truly see the world.'
You portrayed this idea beautifully! I felt that this was a really honest and truthful piece, and I definitely agree with what you have said in your poem.
It's not a big deal that it doesn't rhyme. Poems don't always have to rhyme!
The only other thing I have to say is that I think it's weird how the fourth line in your poem doesn't have a fullstop at the end. And also after the last word 'Today'. But perhaps that was on purpose?
Anywho, this was a really neat poem! A very thoughtful piece! Well done,
~PaperHearts

[Surrealstorm]

Even though it doesn't have a rhyme scheme I think it is a very good poem. The concept of "see with your heart" Is very true and more people need to do so. Great Write and welcome to writerscafe!