When you don't sleep

 Oh absent sleep, where have you been?

 It seems I walked out, just as you walked in.

 When you began to disappear, i find to never miss you.

 And when I feel your effects, it's mass confusion I must get through.

 

 Because the less I get of you, the better my day goes.

 You can see it on my face, in my expression it shows.

 And in the way I wear my clothes, carrying the swagger on.

 It's the price you pay.

 It's the way it goes when you stay awake till dawn.

Reviews

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

O you boring nighttime people
you have so much to hide
but so much that wouldnt be taken if spoken ;)

[Miss Coral]

Great piece- love the tone. :)
Wonderful little rhyme scheme and brilliant word choice. It was a bit confusing for me at first, because I wasn't sure if you were talking about sleep, or a lack of sleep, but I think I understand it now. :)

Nice write!

-Coral-

[brianna vega]

i feel this in my skin