STRAIGHT LOVE

pure white means straight love

It is a dark night

Glittering snows I see fly

Winter is pure white

Author's Note

is it okay?

Reviews

[wordman]

you painted a lovely image

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. I am glad someone saw it through the words. :)

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Sikandar Khan]

Short But Readable..............................................................

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you.

[Sikandar Khan]

Wellcome.......

[Abraham George]

i wont comment about this. Bcoz i need more word than you used. Ha ha ha ha ha

[CAPOLAVORO]

Why are you so rude to me right now Abraham. :(

[Abraham George]

its not rude. i said i cant find words to appreciate your work . its so beautiful

[CAPOLAVORO]

GOTCHAA!! Lol it is a haiku so that is why it is that short. :) I am limited to making 5-7-5 for that one. hehehe

[Surya]

Just three lines but I can see whole winter nights together...
Thank you for sharing..

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much for appreciating it. The snow would always be the crowning glory of winter.

[Tbear]

Nice but title was misleading..write on...

[CAPOLAVORO]

Pure white means straight love. A love without confusion and it has a whole clarity of it. Thank you for noticing my work. :)

[Tbear]

Ahhh very nice... I look forward to reading more :)

[mercy party]

this is very okay. I like the way the second line is worded uniquely. straight up beautiful poem!

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you so much. I am not expecting for someone to like this one. I thought it would just look not appealing. I just watch a snow on a video and was able to composed this Haiku. Thank you.