LOVELESS

LOVELESS

A Poem by CAPOLAVORO
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I can't write romantic poems. Period.

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No sweet on tongue that taste so strong
I am Loveless in all day long
No bright on eyes that looks for light
I am Loveless right on this sight
No song on lip that it could keep
I am Loveless 'till morning deep
No feel of thrill that works my will
I am Loveless that it could kill
No tears of joy that serves a toy
I am Loveless and it annoys

No caress of bliss when in distress
I am Loveless with just no peace
No breath of warmth when there is storm
I am Loveless in all of form
No sign of hope when I can't cope
I am Loveless with no good scope
No rose of faith when trust comes failed
I am Loveless and that is nailed
No ring of gem that comes from him
I am Loveless than all of them

No sweet
No bright
No song
No feel
No tears
No caress
No breath
No sign
No rose
No ring
I am Loveless is my ending


© 2017 CAPOLAVORO


Author's Note

CAPOLAVORO
This is out from a real emotion that I have somewhere in the part of my hypothalamus which I believe is not working right now.

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This is a really nice one! I would say being loveless aint half bad 😉 you gotta be free haha
Regarding the style and context, I think you could tweak the words a bit for a better flow.
I liked the photo, it actually enhances the effect of your write.
Good work 👍

Posted 3 Years Ago


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This was heart breaking and touching.
You exposed your true emotions in a v paradoxial (unemotional) way. This was just beautiful and breathtaking

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow. It's wonderful. You made amazing poem. It's really lot of emotion in this. Nice penned my friend. Keep it up. I'm waiting more from you.
All the very best for you.
Thanks.

Posted 2 Years Ago


i liked they way its written...
i can relate to it somehow...because sometimes i get the same feelings....
great job overall !!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love how raw this is. Very well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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This isn't bad I think. It could be shortened. I think the "No Sweet" down to the end could be its own poem, but I do like some of the rest to support it.

You can also just write a romantic poem about the difficulties of writing a romantic poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


arrr you maybe loveless but you have a heart! sad and lonely theme from the writer's pen i suppose one has to be out there to be noticed and see what happens.

Posted 3 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading Andrew. Oh yeah, my heart.. still beating. :) I am just jealous with s.. read more
andrew mitchell

3 Years Ago

yes i know the feeling and emotions come from experiencing life so there are writes out there!
I like what you did here. It feels like a presentation of apathy but as i read further you may just be revealing the benefits of being a sociopath. It also has a cold and sad loneliness to it as the beating heart was ripped out at some point leaving you numb. Just my take on it, the poem is absolutely great!

Posted 3 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

3 Years Ago

You got it write somehow. Thank you so much M.P. for the read. :)
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Ah bless, from your authors notes I'm struggling to place the hippopotamus bit p!!!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

3 Years Ago

Hehe I see. Thank you so much for reading.
Very imaginative writing that builds a stage for conflict and character turmoil. I like it. The art work is a nice touch that adds to the intensity. Great job

Posted 3 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)
sounds like a sweet poem of love to me

Posted 3 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

3 Years Ago

Oh wordman.. Please don't say this just because you want the dance lol
 wordman

3 Years Ago

maybe i did

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CAPOLAVORO

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