Solemn Harmony

Solemn Harmony

A Poem by Sira YR
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Happy Weekend everyone!!1

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Solemn word breeds Sorrowed tears

And hollowed face spawns grotesque fears


Life drips

Drops

Fades into nothingness

And vessel once filled with emotion

Rots 

Into oblivion


Mournful wails turn immortalized

As voices of plenty 

Wail...and cry


And as final tears fall

And body rests in peace

The heavens shed their sorrow 

In saddened symphony


Yes...


Solemn word breeds sorrowed tears


Hush, 

Let them flow like rivers

© 2019 Sira YR


Author's Note

Sira YR
I had a hard time coming up with a title for this one...don't really know if it suits the piece. Tell me what you all think. :)

YR

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Good rhyming and fresh images here. Also sharp psychologically, with the mention of the relationship of solemn words and tears. Philosophically, it seems to combine Ecclesiastes with Marcus Aurelius. Actually, I think another title might reflect the poem's meaning more accurately. Since the solemn words and tears device appears more than once, perhaps a title incorporating it would be appropriate.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sira YR

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much John the Baptist...I'm going to be changing the name of it so I'll take what you s.. read more



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Posted 4 Years Ago


Good rhyming and fresh images here. Also sharp psychologically, with the mention of the relationship of solemn words and tears. Philosophically, it seems to combine Ecclesiastes with Marcus Aurelius. Actually, I think another title might reflect the poem's meaning more accurately. Since the solemn words and tears device appears more than once, perhaps a title incorporating it would be appropriate.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sira YR

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much John the Baptist...I'm going to be changing the name of it so I'll take what you s.. read more
I love this poem amazing work

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sira YR

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, midnight. I'm glad you liked it :)

YR.
midnight

4 Years Ago

yw yout poems are amazing
This poem is awesome. The title suits it well. Good job here.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on November 23, 2019
Last Updated on December 10, 2019
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Sira YR
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