Dancing With You

Dancing With You

A Poem by Carrie Montgomery

 

as the music begins to play

he draws me near and we begin to sway

his arms around me, his eyes closed, he has no clue

he doesn't know  that I'm dancing with you

his lips gentle upon my ear

whispering of love, but I can't hear

he tells me he loves me and I know that it's true

but in my heart I am dancing with you

the dance goes on and I play along

but in my soul plays a different song

I look at him and cannot help myself

I wish silently that he was someone else

My time with you didn't last

the love we shared belongs in the past

and I don't know what I am going to do

'cause in my dreams I am dancing with you

he loves me, and his love is true

but would he still love me if he knew

that in the dreams and in my heart

I am dancing, always dancing with you?

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Carrie Montgomery


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Oh man, This is a GREAT poem...I still have chills 2 mins after reading. There are so many things that I like about this poem... to many to comment on...So I will just say one thing that I think takes away from the words of this breath taking poem is the blue lettering...Its kind of distracting giving the writer a younger feeling like they wrote with crayons

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Lovely steps of the rocking dance,with the rythamic waves of filled Heart, and feelings.......

Posted 9 Years Ago


love it sista

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow; this will go into my favorites

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great poem . I love the concept

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ok a little mystery in this one???
I loved it and sometimes the mystery
is what makes it great.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can feel your emotion poured out into this write, i like emotional writes they buil dus character, I can feel this from your soul, wonderful and gripping write from the soul, well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

oh sure make me cry....this is beautifully tragic. an amazing write that whispers from my heart. excellent poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

It's funny how many readers connect with this one, and I'm one of them. I've been wanting to write something on this subject for a couple of weeks, but your poem is much better than the ideas I've had in my head.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Ahh, I can relate so well to this. I understand it very well.
There's nothing that I can pick out specifically that I like about this poem, all of it is great!
Amazing piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I can relate to this poem ,,very well done,,GBU, Rodney

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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