Come and walk with me.

Come and walk with me.

A Poem by CDoh
"

ahhhh... ..."The people you meet"...

"
I took a walk down the street
met a man but he looked weak,
he said " im alone, do you mind,
if i take a walk and spend some time"

he told me; "boy i know that you are young
your life right now, just based on fun
but if I could possibly make you see
your life might not end up like me"

and he said " dont dream,
unless you are willing to wake.
You don't learn unless you
just acknowledge your mistakes."

I turned to him, politely said
"im sorry sir, but i must head"
i took a walk down the street
to clear my brain, and gather my feet

in the park i saw a face
unfamiliar, new to this place
she sat down and softly said
"mind if i chat, and clear my head?"

she said " im no longer in touch with whats aroud"
she tried to smile but surely frowned
"listen to the whistle from the tree's
the song they sing cures my disease"

and i said " dont dream,
unless you are willing to wake.
You don't learn unless you
just acknowledge your mistakes

she just smiled and looked away
said " i met a man the other day
he spoke to me of that same phrase
as i slowly piece together my life, this maze

I took her hand, and whispered light
"im alone come spend the night,
my love is pure, I'll set you free
let me be the cure to this disease."

and she said "I can dream,
because you are my reason to wake.
I've lived a life, where i acknowledged
and learnt from my mistakes"

::TO BE CONTINUED::

© 2008 CDoh


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hello new australian friend, this is lovely, reflective. i love to read/write things of this nature, you do it ver well.

nice to meet you :)

K

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CDoh
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