I cry inside.

much of a muchness with all of my other more recent poems, they all fit under a blanket

the longer this goes on

the stranger it all seems,

how a women just like you and me

can fight against this disease.

 

but now its all much harder

her heart begins to cease,

deep brething occupies shallow lungs

as she slowly sdmits defeat.

 

A cold wind blows across my chest

and splits my soul in half,

the chill creeps down my body

the excuse for my cold heart.

 

for now she's in a better place

awaiting us to join,

for our lives are all a gamble

as the lord, sits and flips his coin.

 

but today im not so sour

not a single tear is shed,

for i must protect my angel

give her a place to rest her head.

 

every day i show my brave face

and smile because she's free,

but my tears run down my bones inside

i cry internally.

 

 

::UNFINISHED::

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

This is a very beautiful piece.
I know these emotions u express & u express them very well.
Very Well written.
If u will please pick a poem u like of mine & review it for me?
Thanx even if u don't! =)

[shandi]

I like this one. It reminded me of my Stars or Not... You should check it out. I think you might relate...

[Enigma]

Though it's unfinished...it's really good. So realistic and so sad.I felt the emotions that you put into words here.This is pure skill...from the word choice to the rhyme scheme
Great Job!! I'll read it when it's finished....