Love You Too

We got blood in our teeth

It's staining my lips

Let's ease into this

Because last time it was too tough

We played a little too rough

Let's smile and brush the blood off

Let me hold you with my jaw

While my hearts still a little raw

I don't know how to handle this

But I'll figure it out

We've got to take a different route

So we're not filled with doubt

Let me feel your skin

Let me sink in

I know I look like my twin

But I'm different within

I hope you want me too

Do you want me to

Love you too

You & I

We might've found our paradise

Do you want to roll those dice

Cause I like the view from you

Reviews

[Alessander]

This really hits home because I've been in a psycho-sexual intense relationship with sublime highs and sewer lows, and this poem touches on the "rational" for getting back together...it is indeed rolling the dice, but I suppose that's part of the allure.

[Cae]

thank you so much (:

[Imorbid]

Cae I enjoyed this piece. My only suggestion would be that you leave the last four lines out.

[Tara Marie]

Hi Cae, I like how this piece flows. Because only somebody whos been through it truly knows.