raging inside my mind

raging inside my mind

A Poem by Captain Savage
"

a poem about the urges I have to fight back in my mind. A journey indeed

"

Walking
through
the
battlefield
of
my
mind
something
unexpected
i
did
find

 

urges
at
war
trying
to
fight
for
control
determined
soliders
of
conciousness
fighting
to
keep
them
in
check

 

my
urges
are
in
the
right,
but
polite
society
will
not
let
them
be

 

outside
my
mind
a
moment
I
stand
paralyzed
inside
it
passes
by
an
eternity
© 2007 Captain Savage

© 2008 Captain Savage


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Added on February 11, 2008
Last Updated on May 19, 2008

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Captain Savage
Captain Savage

Norman, OK



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