Broken Crush

Yeah..

 

There's a reason it's called a crush.

There's a reason they make you blush.

There's a reason that the only thing that is hard, is life.

It's all thanks to that boy, that damn boy, with that pointy knife.

It started with a stab to my heart,

and after that I was slowly ripped apart.

nothing I do ever goes well
and everyday i find myself one step closer to hell.

My soul was healing

'Twas no longer greiving.

But then you came around

Ripped my heart out, and threw it on the ground.

It's a secret in my heart I cannot tell.

I try to hide it, but it's not going too well.

not Cinderella nor Snow White
but our own destiny, our own flight

Mixed feelings wanting to say it all.

But after being beatin down, I can only stand so tall

You're a liar and a flirt

who left me, bruised,broken,and hurt.

It wasn't only you

the one who claimed I was her best friend helped too.

She was a liar, you're a user.

My heart calls you an abuser.

Hope you have fun with that s**t

I betchu anything, she has herpies up her butt !

Author's Note

Yeah, I was very angry...so...yeah. I know it's bad, but what can ya do?

Reviews

[lollie_pop15]

W.O.W I think it`s GREAT!!! sounds like something that would happen to me too! LOL

- lollie_pop15

[Bran the Broken]

hmmm. it's actually quite good and simple and poignant, but then those last few lines....well, i can feel the anger, but it's too sarcastic and comical to match the rest. seems a disappointing end to a frustrated love poem.

[Tessa Le Rouge]

angry? nah! i dont get that anywhere in this poem.
=p
great emotions. i can feel the heat through my screen.
love this piece, simple, everyday emotion given life.
wonderful!

[man Atek]

the one who claimed I was her best friend helped too

yeach ... very strong on your the feeling, sep jez !