RiverPoSun [?]

RiverPoSun [?]

A Poem by Carol Maric

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© 2008 Carol Maric

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... just before i 'get it' a cognitive dissonance occurs as synapses rewire and neurons cascade into a meaningful flower!
like some zenzational music, and mind puns jumping outta your words in every moan:u:meant

Posted 16 Years Ago

This demands to be studied and it doesn't disappoint. I love your word play throughout, yet there is so much more than word play here. Thank you.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Lovely... I liked this a lot. I read it a couple of times. Interesting style... cheers.

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carol I don't know how you keep you attention when doing this. It is not my style but you do it so well and I love the flow. I like it alot. Great work

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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4 Reviews
Added on April 2, 2008
Last Updated on April 3, 2008


Carol Maric
Carol Maric

And then went down to the ship, Set keel to breakers, forth on the godly sea, and . . . Ezra Pound (TCOEP).

" My life goal? Literary Immortality--without compromise. " " I would rather be skydiving while writing a book. " philosopher & polymath Author of the unpublished masterpiece PROTEAN NotUnTit.. more..


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