Vanish

Vanish

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett

I hate feeling like this 
so hurt and in pain 
As if nothing that matters
will ever be the same 

The lights gone out 
of my fragile soul 
The darkness has moved in 
taken over control 

I wish I could sleep 
for a thousand years 
Then wake up in heaven 
where there are no tears 

I wish I could fly 
away from this life 
Set my heart free 
let my spirit take flight 

I want to disappear 
Into the darkest void 
From the cruel hearts of man 
where I can't be destroyed


Just vanish from sight

and be no more

But I have to stay

for the ones I adore

 

© 2013 Carolann Dowsett


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the emotions were flowing from the poem...i know that no hell would be cruel than earth...you are a great writer...the piece was excellently excellent...wonderfully wonderful...and fantasticly fantastic...lovely piece...wonderful read...greatly written...keep writing like this...:-)

DEVANSHU RAJPUT

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Wpww!!!

11 Years Ago

can someone read some of mine!!! pleaze
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Later today i will when I've finished my work :)



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Wooo....this sent a shiver down my spine. It's blaring message of pain, angst and responsibility are quite apparent. Geez, how many times I've wished I could sleep a thousand years. To read it in someone else's pen is distressing. Extremely emotive piece of writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thanks Frieda.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

My pleasure. :-)
Was this part of the dark place from where you were or where you unwittingly are going?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

A place I sometimes visit I think when life tries to overwhelm me.
Great point of view, considering others.

"I wish I could sleep for a thousand years, then wake up in heaven where there are no tears" - wonderful stanza

Short, deep, emotional poem

Well done =D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
So heartfelt! great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Trapped in their love, that's not too bad is it? Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) I like that.
Yes! I have felt this way many of times. Very emotional and well-written. Good Job ;D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Tracey C.

11 Years Ago

You are welcome =)
Sadness seems to rain down from your words, seeking an answer, looking for a solution, begging the gates of heaven to open up and let you in, but wait...there are others that still need you and love you. This is the happiness you seek, it will be in their eyes and their hearts. Swing open that gate to your world, you might be surprised at who might just be on the other side.

Well done and touching

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jack.
...I feel you, I do...I am so sorry you hurt...and I understand why too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you, it's ok, I'll be ok.
Night

11 Years Ago

I know you will....:)

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Carolann Dowsett
Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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